Wednesday, September 26, 2007

Stephen Cruz

The definition of the "American dream" is that through hard work and determination, one can succeed. Cruz says that it is not possible for everyone. He thought he was living the American dream because of his abilities, but in reality he was being manipulated for other's purposes. When he was promoted to personnel, he was given a glass office when the other white employees were enclosed. The reason for this was to make the company look good to the government and other employees. His job was to hire people, but when he hired a black secretary, she was fired behind his back without a good reason. If you are an accepted person in society, you can truly live the American dream. He is an example that the American dream is sometimes an illusion for minorities.

Tuesday, September 25, 2007

Class in America

I don't think that Mantsios makes a case that the wealthy are exploiting the poor. The definition of exploit is "to make full use of and derive benefit from". He doesn't make the point that the poor are being exploited, but instead points out the differences between the two classes. It can be assumed that the wealthy are exploiting the poor, but he shows no data to support that. He does point out what advantages the wealthy has, but does not argue that they are using the poor to their advantage. It could be interpreted that the poor are being exploited because the people who have money and power are not doing anything to help the problem. It could also be seen as that classes are a natural function of economic, political, and social society in which we live in. Mantsios does not make an argument that the rich are exploiting the poor. However, I do believe that the rich are making no efforts to help this issue and I do not see that as exploitation.

First Place

Claim: We should fund First Place
Reasons: It provides beneficial services for students
Grounds: rate of success, list of services
Warrant: That the services help end homelessness
Backing: examples of social and academic success
Conditions of Rebuttal: limitations, cost, short term fix
Qualifier: It's a start even if it's not the ultimate answer

Thursday, September 20, 2007

Visual Argument

I think that whether visual argument is more persuasive depends on the person. Some visual arguments could be unclear or distracting, but many can be very powerful. Some people are more visual learners while others are not. Visual arguments are easier to understand right away because all you have to do is look without any reading however, they may have no meaning to some people.

Ethos and Pathos

The author's responsibilities are to provide accurate information without using deceitful ways to make a statement or prove a point. The media and government do not live up to those standards. They will say what they need to say in order to making a convincing argument or statement whether it is true or not. They have no problem pulling on people's emotions to get what they want. For example, on of president Bush's reasons and argument for going into Iraq was that Iraqis had biological and chemical weapons of destruction and were looking for materials to create nuclear weapons. It turns out that this did not happen. They were arguments of convenience because Bush wanted to invade Iraq and was willing to say what was needed.

Tuesday, September 18, 2007

Pseudo-argument

There are people who to this day believe that Neil Armstrong never landed on the moon. The believe that it was videotaped in a Hollywood studio. The have no true evidence that is was filmed, but not matter what you tell them, they believe the same because they are fanatical believers. Even though all the facts proved that he walked on the moon and that it was not possible to tape, they continue to disagree. Recently, the original tapes were not able to be found and those who believe this used the information to reinforce their point.

Monday, September 17, 2007

Pathos

The Greek word "pathos" means suffering or experience and applies to emotions. Specifically, it allows the audience to see and feel in the same way the writes does. Pulling on the audience's emotions is a powerful tool because it draws the reader in. It makes it more believable or even personal. Pathos "engage the imagination and feelings, moving the audience to deeper appreciation of the argument's significance". It impacts the reader's emotions which have a great effect on how the reading is interpreted and reacted to.